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Old 04-08-05, 07:28 AM   #4
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Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
IP:

You dirty Racist !!!!

Just playing man, this verse was deep man was feeling it all the way
flowed alright pretty decent vocab but still room for improvment..

We can't keep blaming the past for our misfortune.

Keep writing man and stay up.

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