Black Poet
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IP:
Sup man this is a very dope verse, I don't understand how you have had
so little feedback.
The emotions in the verse was on point, you painted a clear image on the
world in your writing which is dope.
Vocab was very good, flowed pretty nice lost it at points but u explained
why. Had inner rhyming which again is dope so altogether a pretty hott
verse.
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