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Old 04-08-05, 02:29 PM   #14
Luse Cannon
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dog just stop it,heard u use 2 do topicals & be off da topic's.
jimmy's a fag just like a "pool game" men put they "balls in POCKETZ".
LMFAO... nice ass punch man. one of the best i've heard. 9.5/10

when he was SM he use da say fukk da T.E now dis coward is big.
bow 2 da kid,ya bars make "jay-z" sad datz y he 'lookin down in ya sig'.
lol another hot ass bar. this lookin to be a classic verse. 9/10

jimmy's wack on beats bar's 2 basic ppl in his hood wont press his tape.
so da only time u'll "Drop a single" it'll be in ya "church collection plate".
good punch right here. not as hot as the other ones though. 8/10

off a cd u will not profit,lyin bout u rap pac & be on da block stop it.
must be talkin bout da "microwave snack" cuzz i dont think u "hot-pockets"
aight this was the only thing from stoppin this from being a legendary verse. 6.5
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Listen Marvin u couldnt Conceal "Depth" even if you "Bundled Diggins"
Marvs Bars Sloppy & Inconsistent like Signatures from Russel Simmons
an aight bar nothin special but still aight. 7.0

Truthfully J couldnt Spit hot if u Swallowed a Quanity of Hella Sparkelers
Thats why No one Answers ya "Call Outs" like Tone Deaf TelleMarketers
aight man man now this shit gettin good. 8.5

Talkin bout this is your win Kid?..Heres Advice for u......please Go Bias
But Still Marvins Punches dont land........Like David Swingin on Goliath
i get it. didnt really hit hard but it was a solid bar. 8.0

Stop Rhyming ya not Coniving ya not Mcgrady So u dont get a RightStair
If u were an Arabic Runnin 4 Office..Still wouldnt be Americas Night Mare
first line sucked but the second line made this into a good bar. 9.0

MarvJay:33
Jimmy Pocketz: 32.5

Aight ima have to give this one to Marvjay. this battle was one i actually liked reading cause it was nothin but punches thrown. the only difference is marvs punches was hotter then troops. the only reason it was close to me was cause i hated marvs last bar. overall this was a good battle. but as i said marv took it on punches. cant really say nothin else about it cause punches is all the battle consisted of. they took every chance to swing at each other.

Vote/Marv JAy
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