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Like in the other piece this wasnt really hitten hard..
you need to learn to use better punchlines ,
some hard personals, maybe scoop up some info on marv
your structure was good , ill give you that but thats basically all you had
Sorry i really wasnt feeling this peice... elevate and keep it up
ps: Drop a link or this will be closed
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