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leave you rest'n pz's
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ummmmm....ok.......
IP:
if you refined your technique and structure this could be a good piece
i was gettin ya meta's n all but ya had alot of uneeded gibberish in between ..
work on ya slant ryhmin cuz it fell off consistently...
overall though it was aight..........stay up..keep droppin.....
PLEASE RETURN THA FAVOR......
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change ya font or text size cuz its a bitch ta follow at tymes...pz
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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