^ yeh, and dont take my vote wronly either.....i tend to come off a little harsh because there is alot of people out there who just vote and dont even really explain.....like, obviously you both are new to this, and you need some direction, so i tend to vote a little negatively but at the same time, i do point out the areas of good quality, and areas of improvement, because you aren't going to elevate if you keep thinking you are good, i learned that.....but if both of you keep trying, you know, get some good creative shit and work on structures and wordplay, you both could get the hang of it....word.......and i'll up this for you

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