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Old 04-09-05, 12:10 AM   #16
L.I.3
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dog just stop it,heard u use 2 do topicals & be off da topic's.
jimmy's a fag just like a "pool game" men put they "balls in POCKETZ".
no
when he was SM he use da say fukk da T.E now dis coward is big.
bow 2 da kid,ya bars make "jay-z" sad datz y he 'lookin down in ya sig'.
eh, na
jimmy's wack on beats bar's 2 basic ppl in his hood wont press his tape.
so da only time u'll "Drop a single" it'll be in ya "church collection plate".
ok
off a cd u will not profit,lyin bout u rap pac & be on da block stop it.
must be talkin bout da "microwave snack" cuzz i dont think u "hot-pockets"
no

Word of advice: Stop using quotations.

Pocketz:
Listen Marvin u couldnt Conceal "Depth" even if you "Bundled Diggins"
Marvs Bars Sloppy & Inconsistent like Signatures from Russel Simmons
no
Truthfully J couldnt Spit hot if u Swallowed a Quanity of Hella Sparkelers
Thats why No one Answers ya "Call Outs" like Tone Deaf TelleMarketers
hellz yaaaaa,NO
Talkin bout this is your win Kid?..Heres Advice for u......please Go Bias
But Still Marvins Punches dont land........Like David Swingin on Goliath
wow, no
Stop Rhyming ya not Coniving ya not Mcgrady So u dont get a RightStair
If u were an Arabic Runnin 4 Office..Still wouldnt be Americas Night Mare
no no no no no and no

Word of advice: get better metaphores

V/ Marv...both came horrible, but marv had an ok line.
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