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Old 04-09-05, 12:13 AM   #13
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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^weak opener
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^^nice
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
^^wording was a bit off on the 2nd line, not feelin it
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
^^decent closer
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overall ya had 2 nice bars, pretty good..didnt like the large text but thats besides the point.i didnt see any personals but the body cast line was ya hardest punch..


Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^eh, better then the other verses opener
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
^^wasnt feeling this bar
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
^^punch is played, not very effective
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^nice closer..best concept in the battle, wording a bit off
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overall ya were more consistent with punches n personals
ya closer was nice....prolly couldve been worded better to hit harder but bar 4 bar in my opinion you came harder inthis battle...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!