I am not the best person to give criticism on the technical side of it all so I'ma just stick to the content and the feeling I got from this song.

I already told you I was really digging it and like OMB said, this wasn't a lyrical song. This was pure emotions brought to us so I don't feel there was a need for big vocab, I even think it would've just ruined the whole thing. I enjoy listening to your voice, your singing is very good and I bet every girl would love to get a song like this dedicated to her. I like the beat, the music...it really suits the topic and your singing as well. Quality is good, delivery might be slightly better but you had this vulnerable thing going on which I liked

DQ

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