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Old 04-09-05, 07:49 PM   #8
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DACONTINUE ....I WAS FEELING YA VERSE MUCH MORE, it was definately more refined., got a good technique man.
this battle was really one sided.....good wordplay n similies..
a couple played concepts but they were still koo......
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shells-man i wasnt feeling one bar from ya entire verse...
try to get wittier with ya spits n ya flow fell off a couple tymes to...sa'll good.....you'll get better with tyme..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!