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Old 04-09-05, 08:26 PM   #10
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Handle ya own? nah, couldn’t match my text if it was my thread ya cloned
Ya should be head-in-home, cuz ya lines aint connectin like dead-cellphones
You spittin retarted? Slow? or are you just repeatin what the dumb havta say
I hate preyin(pray)on the(week)weak but worship is monday through son-day

vs

Nothing...
...basically a one-sided vote, ¤ÐÅž¤ just had harder punches,
a good flow, structure was okay, and the vocab was aight...

REDZONE...
...basically you need to fix your structure, get rid of the
brackets ( // ), don't number it, cuz half of RV aint stupid,
make some harder punches & add personas up in there, but
all i have to tell you is that elevate more...

RTF ¤ÐÅž¤...
...on one of my battles
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