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Voted For: Julius Revees
ehhh... not really much to this battle...
i was kinda bored with it...both you guys must be relatively new...
anyways... mad knight..
ya whole style is kinda elementary... had some good ideas but ya style and the way ya expressed ya ideas were kinda blah... with the right mentor you could actually end up being pretty good... opener was pretty weak and basic...best line?... didn't really see one...they were all on the same level... no real punch to any of them... i can say that you were consistant, though...
JR... ya verse was definitely better and ya punches were a lot more effective... even with ya verse being a lot shorter...sometimes less is more... iwoulda liked to have seen more though to check for ya consistancy...best line was ya opener... kinda basic but it connected to ya opponent well... you also can be a very good lyricist with the right help... you are definitely on the right track...
keep writing and learning.... gotta go with JR on this
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