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Old 04-09-05, 09:23 PM   #17
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You can shoot me in tha legs so we can even it out
Cause you talking out ya ass like you aint needin yo mouth
^^decent, but simple
Ya spit hot shit? Then dot’ll give ya top lip fever blisters
Don’t make sudden moves, show me ur hands like Jesus pictures
^^eh, not really feeling it
Fuck wit me, you’ll be using RV money for protection
But dot’s a beast; you’ll be drawing blood like erections
^^eww...lol....no idea how you come up with that..its iffy
I stake down houses, take down spouses, and stab wit pickets
You don’t spit ‘sick’; you just ‘sun-burned’ like pounding ‘ricket’s
^^decent
You aint a killa from blue city…I remove shitty verses
Ya cursing…like a drunk and passing out on purpose
^^wasnt feeling it
I merk kids, im tha baddest, fucka legendary status
My verse is good for 5 votes, so when I’m done u can have this
^^wasnt feeling the first line,..needed a stronger closer j...
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ya verse was aight, nothin outstanding but a couple bars was koo..i really didnt notice any personals.....decent verse j.....
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Engulfed With The Faith..U Da Best?..Think Again..Im Reluctant To Say..
That Dot Is Gay..And This "Lonely" Fag..Has To Nominate "Friends Of Da Day" *
^^ok opener,.......couldve been better
Clone Dis Hatian..Put Ur "Moms In My Brain"..So See Could See "Zone Relations"..
And U Must Know U A Herb..When U Get Kicked Out From Your Own Creation..(NOK)
^^1st line was wack...2nd was aight.....ok punch
U A Raged Chick..Think U Hood Just Could U Supposedly Raised Clicks?..
And Imma Tell U Wat I Tol N.O.K Members..Get Off Of "J's" Dick..
^^blah....wasnt feeling it
J Dot On Men's Dick..Always Show Em' Love..Man Up Cus..
And U Thinkin We Swingin Forearms In Your Direction..The Way TE Duckin Us..
^^nah,..your battlin him not his crew homie
Pop Shit?..And Get Away Wit It..Put The "Master" On Ur Mouth..To "Lock" Ur Lips..
U Mis-Guided Like Five Star Crips..Cave Ur Chest In..To Sho U A Real Flat Top Bitch..
^^ok.........
He Branched Off From His Crew Like Kanye..Dot Is Honestly Beyond Gay..
And May I Say..U On "Jay-Z" Nuts So Much Homie..It's Beyond Say (Beyonce)
^^this was koo.....worded weird..but i amagine it was difficult to make it flow right
RV Members..This Is The Guy U Should Try And Avoid..He's A Bad Choice..
And When NOK Went Audio..He Quit..Cuz He Aint Want No1 To Hear His Fag Voice..
^^nice punch.......
I'll Spaz On U..Homie U A Crew-Hopper..Now He In TE Aka "The Established" Crew..
And The Crew He Founded..Is Now Fightin..Just To Be Recognized As An "Established Crew"..
^^very wack
Have Respect..Gangsta Homie?..U Just Known For Bein A Hood-Wreck..
And RV Niggaz Wouldnt Mind..If U Followed In Your Role Model's Footsteps..(Retirement)
^^nice punch n closer
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hmm, overall you have skill but the amount of not relating fillers n multi's really ruined ya verse in my opinion...dont use multi's if you can';t make sense of them..your punches were hit n miss...
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readin this the first tyme i thought slob merk j..but the 2nd read...he just barely won this battle in my opinion....j was more consistent but slob's punches were more personal..
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close battle.no hate........pz
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!