leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: LexiKon
mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me*
You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family
^^wasnt feeling the punch homie
I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique
Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak
^^flow fell off n kinda simple.....
He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight
It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC
^^??...srry man really not feeling this bar either
Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts
And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth
^^this was funny....not a bad closer.....
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it seemed you either didnt try or didnt care...or just aint good...but you had 1 bar that was decent(closer) other then that i felt ya verse was just lacking in punches n personals...
if the personals were there(i didnt see them or get em)
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My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1]
You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2]
^^decent opener............but simple
You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets"
Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3]
^^2nd line was koo.....
And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4]
First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5]
^^decent name play
And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6]
So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7]
^^weak closer..but i got the jist//...
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well imma go with lex, 2nd bar was koo n it was the most creative outta both verses..you both need to try harder or elevate ya verses n punches...to much simplicity from what ive read in this battle....
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RTF .in the sig.........if ya want
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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