leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: Newkid
Newkid...aka Kordozar's brother...have we even met?*
Practically has so many wins...he's not even a vet
^^wasnt feeling ..not really a punch
Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes
He signed up for the punchline league...
.........................but he doesn't know what that is
^^hmm, decent but simple
Looking like a retard kid...shades looked like there cracked
Typing Like This ...will probably give you more Impact
^^ahh,nope.. links are played to shit man
Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold
Only time you think your rhymes are dark...
.................................is when your typing in bold
^^weak closer...
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you need some word play or personals that'll connect
cuz ya attempts really aint hitting ....srry scripts this was horrible for a verse...........
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when i clap things..........you gon b layin on ya BaK KiNg
'skriptz still aint loyal'..no matta how much he beg n 'write BlaK QuEEn'
^^lol,.decent opener
u wanna be a thug...onli hood u live n iz ya coat head-space
think he push pounds....but like'BiGGie now'u dealin sum 'DEAD WEIGHT'
^^hmm, not bad...didnt hit hard though
yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er'
cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer'
^^i dont like momma disses but shit was worded well...
ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF'
n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl
^^decent closer....forced ryhme but still decent...
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you had a couple bars that was nice..good opener...
not much competition though...against ya...ya flow was koo
ya opener was ya best line i think.....
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RTF......in the sig.........
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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