Voted For: ..::Sinister::..

dabatos-

emotion- could of been stronger but still there.
lyrical content- personnaly I wasn tfeelign the way you spelt certain words wrong.Shyt..dis..comin...cuz...dat...wen...jst.
Its a topical so correct grammar usually helps.
story line-was there but not really strong, but still had one there.
imagery-was good.especially the last line.
originallity-not much to it. you dropped pretty straight forward.
structure- good could of been slightly better but still good.

other guy-
emotion- wasnt really feeling it seen as you wrote more of a mixed up song rather than a deep topical drop.
lyrical content- Isnt strong at all. Nothing that stood out.again words spelt qwrong/slang.to me they dont fit in a topical peice.
story line- not there at all. culdnt even understand if you were still on topic at some points
imagery-couple a lines had some good imagery, but needs to be worked on like a ma'fuckah.
Originality- nothing. There isnt nothing original about your drop.
strusture-a mess,stetched lines,.mixed syllable counts.

vote-dabatos