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Old 04-09-05, 11:08 PM   #35
Dabatos
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This was an okay battle..

effect: your verse basiclly was weak.. very little emotion, and okay imagery.. I thought you were better then this.. your vocab aswell was very off and not good at all.. Im guessing that you haven't battled in a while, but you need to re-elevate on everything..

5/10

Durban: YOur verse was amazing man, I could seriously feel emotion, and see way more imagery.. your vocab as well was on point.. you basicllky took it with imagery and very nice intro...
9/10
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