leave you rest'n pz's
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Voted For: Majestic
majestic- ya through 1 decent punch from what i seen(2nd bar) the rest were so so...i didnt get that closer....enlighten me later.....overall you had ok structure except for that long ass stretched bar...that through ya whole verse off from there on...try not to do that homie.......
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illest-not a very good verse at all..actually it was plain wack..fix ya satructure...dont use///...n match your syllable count when ya writing ya bars..you need to elevate alot..no hate...just being honest.......
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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