Voted For: Bonecollector

Aight Check It..

BoneCollector: 6/10
You Had Some Nice Punches..but Not Too Many Personals. The Structure Was A Little off, but The Reading Content Wasn't Bad. The Vocab Wasn't Too Bad, Originality Was There In Some Bars.

NewKid: 4/10
I Wasn't Feeling The Structure First Off, but You Had A Decent Punch or Two. You Lacked A Lot of Originality and Personals Throughout Ya Verse. The One You Tried Was A Weak Ass Bar..Bout Him Grabbin His Own Skeleton...Not Feeling It.

Vote: Bonecollector: For Better Punches and Overall Battle Verse.

~R~