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Old 04-10-05, 01:40 AM   #6
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damn i just noticed i can't vote..it was close but compose edged it out a lil...imma leave feed anyhow.....
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I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
^^decent opener...weak punch though
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
^^rofl...funny shit(srry fam)
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
^^nah, more filler then anything
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
^^good concept in ya first line but its worded like your dissin yaself...2nd line ruined it....
you did have a funny ass bar though...decent plague
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plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
^^i dont know what crew hes in...but decent
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
^^nice....feeling it
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
^^rofl......k, that ties your gay jokes up...lol
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
^^decent closer.....
just more consistent final/compose...
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not voting just feedback...RTF IN THE SIG
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!