ha first thing i notice were the hot multis and wordplay...

The ground may hurt but in the end, were merely vapor
Paced or….late or …braced for mistakes by our saviors
Save yours…of course ignorance will..Occur in tours
Realness of more …seal this by 2’s and 4’s outdoors…

^my favorite portion and what not.. i'm feeling the concept and how you made it look as if a Madman worte it with the title being half capital and have lower case, and the break offs throughout the lines.. very creative and i dun think nobody hit this topic before it's very original.. stay up kid.. get at me.
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