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Voted For: MaD_KnighT
MaD_KnighT
Cumin into da ring wi me is like takin a lethal dose…
Cuz u shudn’t hav even cum 2 battle with onli 25 posts…..
^okay opener
To cum 2 RV n try battle,u must b 1 real darin-bitch….
Wat a shame, wen u started u wer doomed lik P.Charles marriages*..
^hehe, coo coo
Ur da type of bitch dat see’s a verse den runs away…….
Why put shit about wer u from,peeps don’t care anyway…
^good one
Answer this?RV Legend* ha bitch ur just self-proclaimed….
My verse is nearly over,u’ve just been named n shamed…
^decent bar
Ur da next bitch on –bODy CoUnT’s- list,tlkin about da 9/11 tragedy*…..
Cuz wen u spit shit like dat,u goin 2 jus get killed like John F. Kennedy….
^nice closer
Overall good battle, found good balance in your vocab: not too complex and not too basic either.Had some nice punches in there, good wordplay and such. The last bar was cool personal, your flow was good as well as your structure
Julius Revees
...It Doesn't Take Much For Me To Get My Point Across...Cuz ''Heads Will Roll''... Like A Bad Coin Toss...
^nice wordplay, no real punch though
Truth Never Played A Part Of U....U Dumb & U's A Lier...So Watch Me Put A End ''Mad Knight''... (M.C. Knight)...Like Bombin Tupac's Driver...
^hehe, coo coo
Don't Play With Me...Sene ''It's Not A Game''...U'll Think N.O.R.E.'s Here...& I'm Known For Dropppin More ''Knights'' Than Accient Warriors
^good closer
Okay battle, first bar wasn't really a punch but the wordplay was nice though.The rest were some cool punches, attempted personals with playing his name and such. Vocab was dope as well as your flow but fix your structure because it's harder to read.
In the end my vote goes to MaD_KnighT because I feel he stayed more consistent with the punches, Julius Reeves had some nice stuff in there too but the structure was kinda off for me.
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