Voted For: Bonecollector

Bonecollector takes this shit easily...

Newkid- Man stop bringin the E-Thug shit.. cuz it dont work on computers.. i couldn't understand half of ya verse, cuz u typin like you would talk, and i can't understand what u sayin.. Decent opener from you tho, prolly ya best line.. After that u went downhill.. the Hoodz Crime line was aiite, but again, this aint the real world so bringin gansta online shit wont work, stop talkin about bein thuggish online..Most of ya bars was like that, and it brought ya verse down.. You need to bring more punches, and come wit some persoanals cuz u had none in ya whole verse.. and definately bring some wordplay and complexity next time, and you'l be aiite..No hate dawg jus elevate..

Bonecollector-Decent verse here, obvious you came half assed... Opener was kinda played, and so was the next bar... The bed time line was nice, enough to win u the battle rite there... And the stevie wonder line was a lil played, but it was a Stevie line i never heard tho so it was pretty nice.. Closer was good too.. again, kinda played wit the Jesus line, but a decent bar still.. Good wordplay in ya verse, and nice punches.. coulda had some personals, and a lil more wordplay, but u still won it off punches...

Overall, Collector easily takes this with harder punches and complexity to his verse.. Newkid you jus need to bring some worldplay and better punches/personals to your verses...

V/Bonecollector

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