Nice piece i liked it good vocab rhymes were tight flow was almost perfect...structre was good too...nice imagery u had in this piece...good wordplay...

best line---"When by her side, I seem to get endless feelings of butterflies..
I lover her sexy voice, I love her sexy smile, I love her sexy eyes"

8.5/10 please RTF in my open mic link in my sig

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