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Old 04-10-05, 04:08 PM   #4
King Solo
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not bad, u got potential

flow was good....
vocab was pretty basic....
stayed on point of topic.....

some spelling mistakes in there.......

basically.....u need to work on ure vocab for ure drops...use a bit more complex shit and get some hot wordplay in there....just be more creative n shit.

overall 6/10
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