im definitely not feelin the hook at all.....

beat...im not feelin it....

your flow...is decent....nothin amazing

delivery....is ok..nothin special...

lyrical content....is shitty...

overall...i really wasnt feelin this track at all...your on that gangsta bang bang ima shoot you up shit...which i dont like....for a mainstream track...your gonna have to come up with something better than this...with a more catchy hook...and a wore witty flow that people can bounce to...nobody is gonna bounce to this...and thats apparently what you are going for...but as far as this track goes...its not workin for you...keep elevating

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