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Old 04-10-05, 04:29 PM   #4
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1st verse had better flow.....2nd picked up half way through
overall it was decent...need some wordplay or better direction for ya verses
but the whole "im hard as fuck" concept is played to shit...no hate
just get more creative......(this aint the hood)
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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