This was basic, but I saw where you were going with this. You seemed like you just threw together a few rhyming words though, like ...
and cheated for another guy why did ya lie
everything you say you always try to denie
That don't make sense, it should be "everything I say" not "everything you say you always try to denie"
Flow was quite good.
Vocabulary was average.
Overall= 6/10.

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