yo.. so this was a freestyle right? well if it was, its pretty good, since you sed that on the tittle i tried to imagine you freestyling while reading it and if it was live, it could sound ever better.. The vocab was on point.. but the flow was like too short you know? iono if u get that but yea.. i liked how you talked about u admitting you did something stupid and apologized but they wouldn't except it.. but yo.. instead of ending a verse like.

But it dosent matter cause from my side im callin a truce
That goes for DAZ..LEGEND..FI-DEL..CHALK CLOROX..and DUECE/

end it like

But it dosent matter cause from my side im callin a truce.....
That goes for DAZ..LEGEND..FI-DEL..CHALK CLOROX..and DUECE....

u see at the end of each line.. those periods?? yea cuz if u use bars it looks newbish u get me? lol.. nice verse though... lookin forward to more..
7/10

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