Damn yo... you seriously surprised me.. this was an amazing piece.. forget about structure or perfect flow.. shyt.. your imagery was more then dope man.. it was f'n amazing.. i could picture myself in that battle.. how i look around all my comrades are dead and im the only one standing up.. shyt.. this was a long piece.. and wen i first saw the whole verse i was like.. damn i gotta read this whole shyt?? hell no.. but then immidately after the first 6 bars.. i was like wow.. this shyt is good and then i continued on reading it.. I seriously can't wait for the second version.. yo u gotta promise me that you'll pm me wen this shyt comes out iight? damn oh yeah lol imma rate it.. umm

Vocab: 6/10
Structure: 2/10
Emotion: 7/10
Flow: 5/10
Imagery: 40/10..

60/50

A+ yo.. thats how much u surprsied me..

oh yeah.. and thanx for taking part of my old name *ingenius Mind* cough lol.. nice job man.. pc

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