holy FUCK headgames, why didn't you tell me about this earlier.....you may have had shitty structure (well not that bad), but your IMAGERY IMAGERY was fucking amazing, wow, its like i was fucking fighting that war.....holy shit, this seriously, was such an emotional/imaginative piece, unbelievable how you incorporated both those aspects so wonderfully, JESUS! i loved this.....and it wasn't predictable, WHICH IS SO REFRESHING.....FUCK YOU ASSHOLE, POST MORE OPEN MICS

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