gotta be honest i disliked the first 8 lines(i think it was 8)..
.when it didnt ryhme i was kinda disturbed...but then it picked up...
shit fam, im really feeling some of your vocab...was'nt feeling the
overall structure of ya verse...but it actually flowed fairly well
considering how choppy it was, this was an interesting read..
get ya structure leveled out n ya flow'll fall right into place....
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yep, im glad i recruited ya...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!