Voted For: Given Light

Given Light - Nice Drop!! I liked the topical idea and I really enjoyed your verse, it had a lot of feeling in it, the shit was deep yo. The flow and structure was on point and your vocab was pretty good. You stayed on topic all the way through creating an overall hot piece, i definitely think you should put this up as an open mic. Keep doin ya thing, but one point is try to shorten your lines a bit and it might give you a better flow, still though your drop is tight.

Stanza - A Good Drop!! The oversized writing, i don't get why people do that. Your drop was nice, structure and flow was on point but I think Given's went better. You stayed on topic to and there was effort and feeling visible in your drop. I just think that Given put more into his, i was feelin his verse more. U had good vocab in yours and everything, but overall i think Given takes this because i was feelin his verse more.

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