Voted For: K.SoLo

[center] K.Solo

Opener was alright..good wordplay and meta...the punch was decent...your verse was decent overall. structure was real good... and good flow. it was all on point. a few self glorification lines and fillers. but the rest was hot. i didnt see many personals. multi's i saw some here and there. vocab was aiight. you worded shit koo. but the set up should of been better. overall this verse was pretty nice 7/10

Effect

Toooo basic. i see you havent elevated. your shits still basic. your punches werent hard at all. but you had good structure and decent flow. personals. No. punches were horrible "murder you with gats" and you honestly consider that a hard line? shame...shame it is....multi's...none.....meta's...blah...similes.. .none....overall this verse was horrid 4/10

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