[i]Lol, this is some a nice drop..
I was really feeling it , not the best work...
You could have used maybe alittle better structure..
maybe less fillers... you had some nice punchlines..
Some funny personals...
Overall it was a funny verse.. i liked it ...
The best parts in your verse are the opener and closer , died alittle in between
try to keep pretty decent punche's

Ps: Dont forget to drop a link!

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