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Old 04-11-05, 10:11 PM   #9
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Acuity - Not A Bad Drop!! Flow and Structure was on point, i know ure lines aint stretched, but drop the super-size writing unless it has meaning. The vocab was alright, cud've been better, a few nice metas in there. ure punches were not all hard-hittin, a few nice personals, i liked how u played off his name....but u had a few played concepts, sick and ill shit lines are too played....overall i think u need to come more original and harder....6/10

Young Blaze - U always drop some nice shit and u did again!! flow was pretty gud, a little choppy in places cuz of stretched lines. ure wordplay was hot yo, the vocab and shit was not basic, some gud complex shit. u had sum nice metas in there, the opener was pretty gud, the gunit shit was funny, the closer was gud, but that x-lax shit is becomin played now.....personals were there, some nice shit, overall i think u were more consistent with the hard punches giving u the battle.....7.5/10


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