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Originally Posted by ¤ÐÅž¤
i was feeling the first 5 bars, come off real well
the clsing seemed to fade out, i didnt quite get the overall message
i did up until the word kitchen...dunno what ta say q....
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i was really feelin half ya verse......RTF...
(wish you didnt leave feed on that lame key i did..lol)
oh well thanx anyhow bro
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^^^i felt pretty much the same way, but i liked more than half of it.....lol.
strong piece though q.......nice drop. i was feelin' it (pretty much most of the time). you used some nice vocab throughout, good job. i was feelin' the multies too.
your flow was on point.......and your structure was straight. your message was somewhat blurred.....but deep pieces usually do get misconstrued easily, so dont worry about it. its personal.......and thats all that matters. once again.........good work mayne. oner...
s.v.