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Old 04-12-05, 02:15 AM   #5
FlowIntelligent.
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Decent piece... ya metaphors and wordplay and multies were good... some dope punches but like daz said you definately dont run this shit. Strobe does

go head ask all da noobs n vets,homie L.I yea dat dudes a mess.
got his i.p unbanned just so he could cum back n lose in text.
choose ya death!,but why would i even remove dem techs.
when dis nigga "KON-dumb" like dat shit you "use in sex".*konfliktz/condoms*
its no beef fam but u lose 0-5 now i aint gotta prove who best.
i left the establishment look at they forum now dem fools despressed.

That whole part was just sick then you fell off for the next couple lines compared to these ones... but overall good piece..

And GW > You
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