Voted For: Tstorm

you claim that you still the undefeated
butt if u ever spit shit nobody'll read it
elevate u need it but u'll never be shit
basic vocab, the whole thing was weak and played!!
so leave rap go check anotha career
cuz too me when u rap u look queer
weak again, and more played shit!!
u so wack u cant be a studio engineer
you better live in fear when i come near
the flow is about the only aight thing!!
if the shit i sayin aint true then y u not in a crew
u rap in this game as if u aint got a clue
dont u see the wackest one here is you?
don't work cuz tstorm is in a crew dumbass!!
u probably be tryin ur best at merkin me
but the only thang u'll be good at is jerkin me
weak closer and more played shit, and not even played well in ure verse!!


says hes got a great rec..wow,it stands at a mighty 4 all..
i got him so green with envy..he cud pass as a fruit stall!
aight opener, cud have been better!
thinks hes got a chance of winning..plz, it just aint ya fate..
he couldnt be offensive..if he were a Jap not clearing his plate!
pretty gud line!!
try again with a clean slate..and delete ya pathetic record..
reincarnated as a musical instrument..youd fail to strike a chord!
gud meta, but 2nd line was a little off!!
you couldnt be sick...if u were a nazi comiting human de-borture
your avy says "sr8 from hell"...i believe ya, ya styles torture!
2nd line hot!! 1st line played!!
you so wack..youll probably write ya verses more than twice
but your style wouldnt be "gripping"...if u placed it in a vice!
gud again, vice shit was clever!
ya names as wack as ya lyrics..wow thas creative "hood-dawg"..
ya shit wouldnt even begin to flow..if i flushed it down the bog!
not feelin this, rhymin was off!!
face it your stuck..worse, than a watch that fails to tick..
u cudnt "cum hard"..if u were a pedo watching a child porn flick!
cum hard shit!!! played but still makes me laugh!!

Ok, this battle was weak, hood dawg i am baffled at how u got a vote becuz ure shit was wack. no punches, no personals, u said some fake shit, the structure and flow was about the only thing gud, no vocab really, wordplay = no...multies, metas = no!! elevate ure entire game!!
Tstorm gets it for actually delivering punches and a couple of personals. the vocab was aight but cud use a little work, wordplay was gud in there, but u shud get more creative and shit, beef up punches and add more hot personals!!!

V/ - Tstorm

- Cud u hit up my battle against EscoLayde...I know you aint got the posts to vote on any others!! Links in the siggy!!!

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