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Old 04-12-05, 01:56 PM   #42
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

meh, this was a decent battle

untraceable....i thought you had a cool verse, you had good imagery at the end, but the start wasn't too good, and the emotion coulda been better, i think thats why flow got my vote, he had better imagery and emotion...but you did write a solid verse, came good with multies and structure was good too, flowed nicely, but i think flow took it

flow, nice verse, interesting, good imagery and emotion, and you kept it consistent, which really separated you two, good use of multies and rhyming, and overall a solid verse, keep up

v/flow
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