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Old 04-12-05, 02:23 PM   #6
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Odi et Amo
 
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I'm feeling this poem because it kinda reminds me of my own writing style (don't know if you should take it as a compliment though lolz). The emotion was the strongest aspect of this piece, without a doubt. The topic was very good, I felt you worked it out in such a nice way. The vocab was basic yes but I feel that is the beauty of the piece, the simplicity lets you focus on the content. I like how you managed to portray the essence of writing, the meaning of poetry to that person. I also write to vent my emotions and thoughts so I could definitely relate to this.

Nice drop girl!

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