I can't believe you haven't gotten any feedback yet because this was a nice drop. I am definitely feeling the topic you are handling here and how you worked it out. It's packed with emotion and I like the way how you worded everything, for instance:

"My futures a ball n it can roll in any particular direction"

"17 years old, similiar to a turtle, coming outta ma shell"

Your vocab was outstanding in my opinion because you kept a nice balance between complex and basic, it was easy to read and yet didn't come off as elementary. You had your flow on lock because of good multis, nice rhyming and such. I also think it's easy for many of us to relate to because of the subject you picked...

Good drop!

DQ

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