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Old 04-12-05, 03:37 PM   #33
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Voted For: Tstorm

T Storm took this battle
Storm
Good punches and a couple aight personals...
there were no multies or any outstanding rhymes but the punchlines got this for you...
i liked the grate line, the period line and the evolve line. those were all pretty hot and made ur verse stand out better...

Evolution
your verse was very basic... there were no real punchlines except maybe for the last one... if that was a punch, then it was really weak... but anyways,there was nothing special at all about your verse so it feel short to Storm's.

V/ T STorm
RTF!!!
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