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Old 04-12-05, 08:11 PM   #26
The Black Plague
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Goin wit Slobk on this... even bar level, Slob jus had more of em..

J Dot- Not a bad verse from you.. honestly, not good either.. Excluding ya first 4 lines.. now i dont care if its classified as "bitin" but u did take them lines from the mixtape (forgot the rapper) but i heard it.. and its identical.. i doubt he stole the lines from u.. But aside from those lines, decent verse.. The erection line was aiite, nothin great.. the Sun burn line didn't make no sense, and was wack anyway.. The Drunk line was prolly ya best line.. but still was just decent... First line in ya closer was self glorification, and was decent but not a good line.. Last line was a good line, but still nothin special.. overall, a mediocre verse at best.. coulda come wit somethin better.. and next time dont take lines..

Slob- Long ass verse, some nice lines throughout...Opener was funny, nice personal.. and the next line was nice too..lol... The Raged chick line was wack, and the Get off j's dick line was nice.. nice wordplay in there.. The TE duckin line was wack too, to was the next line... Flat top lin was gay, didn't make sense.. the Beyond gay/ Beyonce line was nice, and the Audio diss line was decent... THe "established crew" shit was wack.. wack concept, used the same word to ryme.. Last line in ya closer was ya best line, again, dissin him D/R Jay..nice verse here, more than enough to take the win..

Overall- Slobk takes this with better personals and hard punches, and had more content in his verse.. also he had a longer verse, and more nice lines.. better wordplay from slobk, and he didn't BITE... Dot i expected better from you.. not a good drop from you

V/Slobk
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