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Old 04-12-05, 09:22 PM   #2
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Lyrical - aight drop............flow was aight, bit choppy in places, ure structure is fucked honestly u need to fix that....and drop the // cuz they make ya look herbish!!! vocab was pretty basic throughout with some spots that were quite gud....wordplay was weak, ya had a couple of metas in there which were aight. ure punches tho were average, a couple of fairly gud ones, but some weak to and some self-glorifyin goin on in there. some attempted personals but i don't think shit was comin off as gud as it cud've done but still an ok drop. 6.5/10

Showtime - flow and structure on point better than lyricals....ure punches in ure verse were similar because they were not hittin as hard as they cud. i see the effort put into them but a lot could be worded better for a nicer effect. some personals in there although i wasn't feelin ure opener, i thought that was very weak!! the closer to was weak, mainly filler and not a real punch. not much for creativity, just some basic vocab and shit, nuthin special that i aint seen before. need to elevate on ya punches, throw in some dope ass metas and multies and hot personals and you'll go far!! 6/10


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