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Not bad.......nice wordplay........but u kinda over worked it a lil.....try putting it in better structure.......you had some aaight metas something you can fix pretty easy.....and when i read it i could tell that ur good at visiuals great work there..........but dont try to be so confusing with ur wordplay take it easy with that and work on ur metas....get good at those and u wont need wordplay!.........7.8/10.....nice Drop!....peayces
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