couple questions
how long have you been writing?
are you really 14?
n how long ago did vinci ask ya to tryout?
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the verse was aight, i was feeling a couple bars that seemed real
personal n real to you(from a readers aspect)your direction was a bit cloudy
but overall i think rb has a lil different writing style the rv.........ill mention this to him
sit tight, should only take a day or so to get an answer on ya..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!