"Speaking words of blasphemy on chapels of broken bricks"

Wow, that was deep. And I liked how you used that.. "Blasphemy" wow, I woulda never thought of that word!
Nice usage of words and great vocab.. You sure can paint a picture with this, but your structure was off man. Def. fix that up.. Overall nice drop. 7.9/10

And lemme know what you think about my piece Perpetual Darkness.. I have a link under my Sig.. Thanks..

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