oh fine daz... the line about me was sick the rest was wack> is that betteR?

work on your structure and your rhyme scheme is fucked up... i dont like how you break one line into 2 lines just so people dont say you stretched the bar... everything kinda dragged on you should have made the beginning the best part... then you would have caught everyone attention... decent wordplay and some solid punches

6.5/10

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