First dude's got a weird voice.....his flow was bad....he started rushing his first couple bars....den he slowed down an was dragging his words jus to hit snare....his delivery seemed forced..like he was trying to seem energinetic but it doesn't seem like it his style.....kontro....u got better son.....u came in wit nice emotion....ya delivery felloff towards the end tho....ya flow was good in beginning as well then felloff towards end...last couple bars u seemed to rush ya lines....this sounds like a rushed track...y'all prolly did this real quick cuz its very unpolished...but anyways keep dropping & improving son.........1

Return the favor son:
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